Hesiolite's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Set Up To Fail]

1.I like your style
2.That was really good

Keep it up.

[Lay the pipe]

Man the joke just dragged on to much. But that's okay.

IncognitoNinja responds:

Thanks I'm not sure where it started dragging for you as it is a short video but I do think it could have used better comedic timing. I'm thinking the time before the punchline should have been spaced out a bit more for anticipation, but that's what you get from an amateur ninja like myself.

[The Breakfast]

Thank you,you too.

[GMSU 03-19-18]

Great Jimmy,but....No Tree Tings !?

threebrain responds:

hahaha i totes forgot :-O

[HOT OLD LADY ACTION!!!]

Nice and colorful ! As I like it !

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Just like grandma used to make!

[Robbery]

Well,that was rather nice and entertaining.I really like the very childish aspect the drawings have.
However I wouldn't have watched even two minutes of something like that in a longer video,because for a comedy based cartoon,I thought it really wasn't that funny.Maybe you could try to spend a bit more time and thoughts on the humour.And with that I think you could make a really worthy piece of animation. Keep improving !
Ah yeah I also wanted to know: Do you make the voices yourself or you hired someone to do it?

Oddlem responds:

I don't mean to be the kind of person making excuses, but I showed a few people a rough version of this and that they told me that they liked the jokes. So I'm not quite sure what to do about that. ;u; Maybe it was because my writing was just weak so it didn't really hit too well?

And yeah actually! It was an interesting experience. ovo